Update: Rendezvous with Fate

khym_chanur just edited Prologue to chapter two and I've just gone over the changes and
re-edited everything.

That was uploaded in Fanfiction.net. I'm still not redoing my webpage because that's such a 
big task to handle right now with my harddrive crashing, but I do have a copy of the pages
downloaded from FTP (what a nifty thing FTP is isn't it).

Grammar changes and technical stuff. Right now I'm very confused with punctuation with quotes.

For example, a previous pre-reader told me it was like this:

She sighed. "Tell me what to do."
She sighed and then said, "Tell me what to do."
"Too bad you can't come with me," She said, "You should go to your dad."
"I wish I could come too," He said, clearly meaning it.

But now it's:
[Bad username or unknown identity: ][Bad username or unknown identity: ]"I wish I could come too," he said, clearly meaning it.

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I am now really confused where to take the punctuation of Rend and am going back to consult my English grammar/punctuation books waaay back in high school.

rediscovering flash games by avoiding thesis

I haven't slept yet. Well I took a small nap but really I haven't slept for the 'night' yet. I've now been officially left as the head of the house as of five hours ago, when my parents went to the states. It has never happened before, my grandmother went to the US some months ago and my uncle has gone to Pakistan.

We are now home alone. And my parents left me the money for food etc for the next ten days... In fairness, I never knew we spent that much money in just ten days.

Well, anyway, to keep me awake I've been surfing for stuff, and since I am a gamer, finally went to find some free gaming online. Which is not of the ragnarok kind, nor is it any of the online games that people pay for. I went to free flash games.

Funny I remember I had a neopet name sometime ago, just that neopets is such a waste of time... I mean who has the time to lavish on a pet right? But yeah I still have my neopet a pet which is almost as old as the site itself, but not really all that well fed. :(

Well, I found a game that would be good use for 'Japanese olden time layouts' or whatever if Ronin actually follows the usual 1600's Japanese manor, which I think it does anyway. Pretty cool, but rather difficult for someone who, although am a gamer, gaming is not my entire life.

Well anyway, I've downloaded that and saved it in my little 'scrapbook' in mozilla. It's now working offline. Enter the House is nice too, except that the girlfriend is waaay too sensitive. The guy's problem is that he needs to go to the bathroom. Guardian Angel is ok, to the extent that I can fly around (with limits) and the wings effect is pretty nice. Finally, Crimson Room, Viridian Room and Blue Chamber are Mind Boggling and all need to be tried out.

As for the sim girls, Love Hina, Sim Girl, don't. It's not worth your time. Unless of course you're in to that kind of thing. But since everything is generally a waste of one's time, go ahead and check it out anyway.

Actually flash games even have lots of the remnants of the old famicom, like Galaxians, Tetris (obviously, several of them in fact), PacMan and Candyman. If you haven't heard of candyman... gaah what age group are you in? My 15 year old sister has played that.

Oh yeah, if you want some dumb conversation with your character (in RPG's I mean) and still think about how to finish the game. < a href="http://www.t45ol.com/play_flash_us.php?ID=1005">Legends of Hiro is an adventure/RPG of the shortest proportions that I've ever seen. It's got a few well drawn pics of girls with big boobs and all that. Love Hina and Sim Girls don't even come close to the quality of the CG here.

OK that's it on to my thesis... how sad.

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